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Post by PabloZ on Apr 11, 2008 17:17:09 GMT -5
Hi im pabloz and this is my.... song (no scared story today) maybe the beggining its too quick but i do wat i can and i really dont like the chorus but thats up to you the intro is kwl ^^ anyway enjoy and post plz ;D www.mediafire.com/?jgd1vflf4bz(P.D plz dont get angry with me....)
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Post by iamsensay on Apr 11, 2008 17:59:32 GMT -5
Ill dl this and play when i get up 2morro. expect feedback in 10 hrs.
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Post by PabloZ on Apr 11, 2008 22:14:22 GMT -5
sry bout that already changed it
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Post by iamsensay on Apr 12, 2008 5:26:07 GMT -5
Dude, its not bad but there are some areas that i think need attention. There was one section where you hit a B,O HO 4 or 5 times in succession and yet you can here at least 4 notes being played... A couple of areas were out of sync too. And wtf at the begginning of the song? Record some silence in the begginning of your .ogg so it starts a couple of seconds later, or use feedback to delay the start? It will really help the song. Other than that this is very good and better than anything i could do!!
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Post by PabloZ on Apr 12, 2008 17:31:19 GMT -5
yes sry its just my first song xD ejjeje and thx.... im trying to gather hopes maybe i could do some more songs... maybe but its stressing sometimes the part you say its [censored] hard to do!!! just because the vocal just dont shut up and i cant get well the guitar
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Post by iamsensay on Apr 12, 2008 17:50:22 GMT -5
well i can tell u that i would be expecting 3 HOPOS in ascending order followed by one back down so possibly Y,B.O,B though they dont necessarily have to be the next note along you could space them out. As for the timing, as the notes are HOPOS and so close together it should not be hard to chart. Good Luck an i look forward to an update...
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Post by PabloZ on Apr 12, 2008 18:10:03 GMT -5
jeje ok ill update later
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Post by PabloZ on Apr 13, 2008 11:35:35 GMT -5
(sry repost) i have changed some things but actually i dont know how to change the chorus if anyone can help me with this i will aprreciate it too much i have added a silence at the begging of the song (6 seconds) and corrected some other things i have converted the .mp3 to .ogg with audacity (thx iamsensay) and the thing left is the chorus or the part with high cuantity of notes anyway need help with that cause in that part im using the secondary guitar and ill like to change it to the lead guitar any contribution would be very helpful xD
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